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stargate, DanielJackson

Week 5, Title: Persistence

Posted on 2014.04.12 at 08:04

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darkdreams1222
dreamsofspike at 2014-04-12 10:51 (UTC) (Link)
Oh this is so bittersweet. I love that Sarah accomplished what she set out to (more or less) but it tears at my heart that it's not enough to give her what she'd want, to allow her to go back in time to when the love of her life was still with her...

You really got across the mood, the tone of the story very well. Love it!
swirlsofblue
swirlsofblue at 2014-04-12 10:55 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you, so glad you liked it :)
solstice_singer at 2014-04-14 02:01 (UTC) (Link)
I agree with the previous commenter. You told the story well, captured the emotions of the characters perfectly. A very nice job.
swirlsofblue
swirlsofblue at 2014-04-14 05:59 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you, glad you liked it :)
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