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stargate, DanielJackson

Week 22, Title: Better by far you should forget and smile

Posted on 2017.06.25 at 18:46

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The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors
halfshellvenus at 2017-06-27 01:19 (UTC) (Link)
I really like how you used this prompt to show two different people's approaches to dealing with the same situation. Juanita thinks she's moving forward (she's not, she's avoiding), and Andy thinks he's retreating into mourning (he is, but he gives too much of himself over to it as time goes by).

with these holes inside them that they’ve papered over
Perfect description for such an awful state-- one that only gets better, with luck, but never fully goes away.

This whole scenario is every parent's fear...
swirlsofblue
swirlsofblue at 2017-06-27 16:27 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you, glad you liked the two different people's approaches. And so glad you liked that line :).

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