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stargate, DanielJackson

Week 23, Title: But none of them are ours

Posted on 2017.07.05 at 22:38

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rayaso
rayaso at 2017-07-07 17:29 (UTC) (Link)
I wondered where the story was going (in a good way) and you ended it on such a strong note. The warning (“Be careful. He only wants to use you.”) made me question all the good things that happened, as you intended, waiting for something bad to happen, right until the very end, especially with its promise of revolution. Very good job!
swirlsofblue
swirlsofblue at 2017-07-08 09:14 (UTC) (Link)
Thank you, so glad you liked the ending :)
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